
Five Common Mistakes When Writing A Personal Statement
by Maud Millar ⢠June 05, 2021 ⢠University
So, youâve decided that you want to go to University. But before you can get there you need to complete your UCAS form. Without a doubt, the most daunting part of that form is writing your Personal Statement.
Your Personal Statement should be a culmination of everything youâve done and achieved to date, without showing off or hitting the wrong tone. As a result, writing a personal statement is a difficult balancing act that requires skill to get right.
Weâve spoken with our crack team of teachers to discover some of the most common personal statement mistakes students make. Here are the top five mistakes students make when creating their personal statement.
1. Failure to show academic suitability for your chosen subject
Why have you selected the subject(s) youâve put on your UCAS form? If youâre unable to articulate this and demonstrate your suitability for your chosen courses, youâre unlikely to receive an offer from the universities you applied to.
2. Not showing how youâve developed your knowledge
Youâve studied hard at school and your predicted grades match or are better than the course requirements, but thatâs not enough for most universities. A lot of students think that grades are all that matters to universities. University is hard, and the level of understanding required is far higher than school. But can you demonstrate what youâve done to further your knowledge in your chosen subject outside of school?
Too much focus on extracurricular activities
Universities also want to get to know you. Most of us would not define ourselves by the subjects weâve studied at school, or the grades weâre likely to get. But often, students spend too much time on what they do outside of school to the detriment of their academic capabilities. Thereâs a fine balance, so you need show who the real you is, without diverting focus away from the admissions teamâs core focus: are you suitable for the course youâve applied to, and will you come out the other side with a good degree?
Inappropriate use of language
Whatâs the best tone of voice to use when writing your personal statement? Should you be formal and risk being a bit bland? Or should you reveal the real you? If youâre too chatty, universities wonât take you seriously. But if youâre too formal, youâll come across a bit like a robot without a personality.
Remember, if youâve decided to apply to go to University, youâre likely considering a residential degree where you leave home - probably for the first time - to live near campus. Will you fit in with your course mates? Will you fit in with your housemates or the community at the hall of residence? These are questions that the admissions team will be asking as they read your personal statement.
A lack of editing
Right now, you probably donât know where to start with your personal statement, and you can feel yourself procrastinating. Youâre anxious and have lost confidence in your own abilities. You start to doubt whether you should even be applying to University.
You end up rushing your personal statement.
Youâre under pressure to meet the deadline, and you just submit your first draft. Your personal statement ends up being full of spelling mistakes, bad grammar and poor formatting. You also rambled on about something unimportant, and you ended up repeating or, worse, contradicting yourself. This is enough to turn universities off - youâve shown a lack of care and attention to detail. And theyâve struck you off the list.
Donât fall into these traps. I know itâs harder than it sounds, but you can do this. And Adapt, weâre here to help you through what can be an incredibly stressful time. Adapt is free revision timetable app that adapts- if you get more done than expected, or miss a session, Adapt will move it to another day to make sure you get everything done by exam day, stress free. Letâs smash this together.
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