A Level How to write the Perfect Statement UniRise

This subject is broken down into 41 topics in 3 modules:

  1. Introduction 7 topics
  2. Course Research 16 topics
  3. Your Personal Statement 18 topics
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How to write the Perfect Statement

Introduction

Welcome 👋

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"Welcome 👋" Section Revision

  • Understand that the Introduction section of your University Statement is a crucial part of your paper and sets the tone for what's to come.

  • It's your first (often the only) chance to make an immediate impression on the admissions officers.

  • The Purpose of Welcome Section is to capture the attention of the reader. You need to convince them that your application is worth reading.

  • The Welcome Section should be personalised and specific. Avoid using clichés or making generic statements.

  • Effective methods to start your Introduction are through an anecdote, a fascinating fact, or a thought-provoking statement. Ensure these are related to your desired course or your passion for it.

  • This section should be able to stand alone and be meaningful even without the rest of the Statement.

  • Ensure that the Welcome Section is engaging, intriguing, and introduces 'you' to the reader. This is a chance for them to begin understanding your character and your motivations.

  • Avoid using the phrase 'From a young age…'. This is a very commonly used phrase and can make your statement feel generic.

  • Work on crafting a clear and concise introductory sentence. This stands as the 'hook' and should be captivating to draw the reader into your personal statement.

  • It's worth spending a significant amount of time to get it right. The Welcome section could be the determining factor between your application being shortlisted or not.

  • Proofread this section multiple times, and ask others to check for errors. Your introduction should be flawless in terms of grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

  • Finally, make sure this section stays within the word limit set by UCAS.

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How to write the Perfect Statement

Course Research

Emailing the university 🏛

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Initiating Contact with the University

  • First Impressions: Remember that your email could be the first contact you have with the admissions team, so make it count. Use professional language and format, and address the recipient appropriately.

  • Subject Line: Make sure your subject line is clear and concise. It should indicate the purpose of your email, such as 'Query Regarding Course Content for Mathematics'.

  • Check Twice: Before hitting 'Send', verify that you're sending the email to the correct recipient. Common university departments to contact could involve admissions, specific course leaders, or scholarship offices.

Contents of the Email

  • Introduction: Always begin by introducing yourself. Include your full name, your current school, and your potential course of interest.

  • Purpose of Email: The reader shouldn't have to guess why you're emailing. Be clear, direct, and respectful in your inquiry or request.

  • Referencing: If your query is about specific information on the university's website, provide a link or thorough description of the page in your email.

  • Concision: Keep your email concise but comprehensive. Long emails could be seen as burdensome; ensure your inquiries are succinct.

Ending the Email

  • Sign Off Considerately: Use a professional and polite sign-off such as 'Kind Regards' or 'Yours Sincerely', followed by your full name.

  • Contact Information: Provide your contact information even though it may be in your email signature. This can include phone numbers or alternate email addresses.

  • Attachments: When attaching any document with the email, mention it in the email body. Also, name the file appropriately for the recipient's ease.

Follow-up Practices

  • Response Time: Be patient. A reply may take several days, especially during peak admission periods.

  • Chasing up: If the university hasn't replied after a week or two, it is reasonable to send a polite follow-up email.

  • Taking Feedback: If the reply to your email gives any pointers for future queries, keep it in mind the next time you email. This shows respect for the reader's time and effort.

Remember, communication with the university is a step towards creating a rapport with them. Professionalism and politeness are key in portraying your seriousness about your application.

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